First draft evaluation

We presented the first draft of our music video to our class and we received a mixture of positive and critical feedback.

Here are some examples of positive feedback we received:

• "Lots of really nice editing."
• "I loved how the shots became distorted in correlation to the video."
• "There use of bright colours goes in hand with the nature of the song."
• "Editing flows well throughout - suits genre and her image."
• "360 with the dogs is very effective."
• "When is goes slower, I like how all visuals link with the pace."
• Creative and interesting shots that clearly show the artist image."

Here are some examples of critical feedback:

• "Some of the shots were used a few times."
• "Gets slightly repetitive at the end of the video."
• "Sometimes too many close ups lip synching."
• "Not many transitions, mainly straight cuts."
• "The shot with Nova on the sofa with the bubble bath image above didn't flow as well as the other editing."
• "Leg and fairy light shot is used quite a lot."